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She was also the last person caught peeing on the building. Why she stayed in hose range after changing into the dry shirt is a good question though.

I have a lot of things I think would be better, but I don't know if you mean wholly different ideas with the same setting, or things I would do different with this, or what. My criticism was mainly that elements didn't line up with each other to support the universe they created, and most of all the acting was so stilted.
If you want me to be specific about this:
They lay on that danger is around every corner, but seem to separate from one another regularly despite literally stating not to at least once.
Their attitudes and the way they move and behave in the environment are more like a couple people on vacation, and show nothing to support that this environment could kill them at any second.
I couldn't tell if the daughter was estranged from her father, because there seem to be this "get to know you" scene in the tent, but it could have easily been terrible acting. If it weren't, a single line of clarification could have surpassed that.
This stuff their collecting is extremely precious, but at a point of leisure in their tent they still have to open up their container and look at it to know how much they've collected?
Also, said resource has a stupid name. Almost as bad as "unobtainium" (I don't care if it's a real mineral, it pulls you immediately out of the story).
The girls attitude toward pursuing and killing the other soldier was almost lackadaisical.
They have pretty heavy respiratory suits, but it's possible to survive a slog through the jungle with nothing more than your head wrapped in tape with an air-hose?

I don't like long posts on the sift because at a certain point you just don't want to read anymore, so I'll stop there.

Wow! That was a quick one!
Looks like there is no refueling going on though.
Seemed like "just" a fast tire change, maybe due to a change in weather.
Usually all planned stops are used to refuel as well.

If I recall it correctly one of those pressurized fuel hoses in the F1 pumps fuel at 16 litres a second (thats 4.2 Gallons for you imperial folks)

get a room you two!
dont make me get the hose!

I'm not arguing that it doesn't exist, or even work to an extent. I'm just saying it's not what I meant by 'movie silencers' where a simple tube suppressor is screwed to a simple barrel end with a 3/4 twist.
It's neat, but not what I'm talking about.
That said, 'nearly airtight' leaves leaks that allow pressure waves to escape, defeating the purpose of the suppressor to an extent. Also, high pressure water and gas is not the same as explosive pressure waves, I hope this isn't just a modified hose quick connect, the pressures dealt with are on different levels.
The SOCOM pistol example seems to say that, even with the bonus of much faster field installation/removal it wasn't worth the weight or didn't work properly, or both. There's a reason they went with difficult to keep clean and hard to install machine threads.

I was thinking "Ohhh this guy is all science-y, how's he gonna clean that off? I'll bet it'll be with some kind of pressurized water device in a sealed chamber in the lab or...oh, his garden hose...or that..."

It looks like there's suppose to be a hose attached, like the two posts next to it. You can actually see the hose on the ground. I guess when the hose came off, it just started spraying.

Just ... wow.
Was like some nightmarish muppet version of Schindler's List. Was waiting for someone to open a fire hydrant and get a hose.

Yet there is a perfectly good hose on the ground right next to it they could have used.

Nice! When you come by in your lds white cotton dress, I'll turn on the sprinkler! You don't need Michael Cera's hose!

I had to google "lds clothing" to see what you were talking about. Brilliant idea! Twerking in a thin white dress could be the latest fad. Just add a garden hose + water...and voila! More popular than a wet t-shirt contest!

I'd like to know the story of how this began. "Well, one day I was bored by myself and feeling kind of lonely, you know, and I saw this hose lying on the ground..."