This is so sad...

>> ^dan00108:
This is so sad...


Sad: Yes
Wildly entertaining: Very

wow...
now i know how it feels like if you have the urge to laugh, scream and puke at the same time......

Ah, so torn. On one hand this is hilarious and makes me embarrassed for humanity. On the other, the author is a guy who writes fanfiction to teach himself English http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1047027/squirrelking. Yeah, his stories are all crap, but for a good reason, and he's already surpassed the level of Star Wars Novelist as a writer.

I thought it was excellent up to the deus ex machina ending...

Then it suked - relly hard.

Bloopers: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mM5EkencwNg

I don't think this meant to be fan-fiction as much as parody. Maybe I just "get it" =P

>> ^Razor:
I don't think this meant to be fan-fiction as much as parody. Maybe I just "get it" =P


The actually story is written seriously. The narration and animation is by someone different and is to parody the crappy story. That's cool that he wants to learn english, but it doesn't make the story any less crappy.

Oh man, I can barely type... sides hurt too much

"and gave them hop"

OH DEAR GOD IN HEAVEN MAKE IT STOP!

AHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!

Henry Freeman really had to face Real Life Consequences this time!

*promote

Promoting this video back to the front page; last published Tuesday, March 17th, 2009 4:40pm PDT - promote requested by EDD.

>> ^Razor:
I don't think this meant to be fan-fiction as much as parody. Maybe I just "get it" =P


Obviously you don't, humen.

I write stories (not fan-fiction mind you) to practice my Japanese sometimes. The difference being that I usually upload it to lang-8 or ask my Japanese friends to check it over before I post it on my blog or anything. If you are learning a language but are never corrected on your mistakes, you will develop bad habits. So yeah, kudos to this guy for trying so hard at learning English, but seriously, find someone to proof-read before you upload.